Ben is working on a multi-part writing project about Australia. We have frequently discussed that each piece has two naratives. One is about a virtual trip to Australia. The second is general information about Australia. We spoke a number of times about how to weave these things together. We outlined how each entry could address a different Australia topic.
He worked on the draft of a piece yesterday. I told him I would read it today and give him some general editing suggestions before he mailed it on to Kris (she works with him on writing). When I read the draft there was no general Australia information at all.
Was I not clear? Was it too complicated for him to process so he skipped it? Did he simply not want to? I do not feel much closer to figuring him out.
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